November 18, 2013

Day One by Nate Kenyon

Day One
Day One by Nate Kenyon
Series: N/A
Source: Netgalley
Publisher: Thomas Dunne Books
Publication Date: October 1, 2013
Scandal-plagued hacker journalist John Hawke is hot on the trail of the explosive story that might save his career. James Weller, the former CEO of giant technology company Eclipse, has founded a new start-up, and he’s agreed to let Hawke do a profile on him. Hawke knows something very big is in the works at Eclipse---and he wants to use the profile as a foot in the door to find out more.

After he arrives in Weller’s office in New York City, a seemingly normal day quickly turns into a nightmare as anything with an Internet connection begins to malfunction. Hawke receives a call from his frantic wife just before the phones go dead. Soon he and a small band of survivors are struggling for their very lives as they find themselves thrust into the middle of a war zone---with no obvious enemy in sight.

The bridges and tunnels have been destroyed. New York City is under attack from a deadly and brilliant enemy that can be anywhere and can occupy anything with a computer chip. Somehow Hawke must find a way back to his pregnant wife and young son. Their lives depend upon it . . . and so does the rest of the human race.

I really thought that I would like Day One. I'm a member of the tin foil hat group, so the idea wasn't really that implausible to me, and I thought that it would a great addition to the dystopian genre. I was a tad bit wrong there - unfortunately, I just didn't love this one. It was okay, it just wasn't what I was looking for.

Let's start with our main character, Hawke. I just couldn't connect with him. He was too nervous, too jumpy. I also probably had a hard time connecting with him because he's a guy. Let's just throw that out there. He just wasn't the take-charge, bad-ass guy that I would want around in this situation.

The secondary characters all fell really flat for me as well - they were just names on a page. There was a time when I couldn't even differentiate between them, but as the book wore on... they started to disappear, so it became a lot easier. They weren't any better, but there wasn't near as many.

But I have got to move on from the characters, I'm just depressing myself by talking about them. Let's move on to the storyline - an invisible enemy that can take anyone down with a computer chip. If it has an internet connection, it's on to you. It knows exactly where you're at, and what it needs to do to take you down. Probable.

But let's add this tiny SPOILER-it's just a computer. A computer that is thinking and making decisions for itself - that's the improbable part. I believe that machines are tracking you, and that people can track you using them... but machines just can't think on their own. There is no algorithm that they can be taught that will make them think on their own. There's always somebody behind the desk.-SPOILER END.

That spoiler makes it all improbable. This is where my freaked-outed-ness went downhill. Because at that point, the story just lost all of it's meaning for me. Before the reveal, I obviously assumed that it was a covert government operation or something, when it wasn't.

Another pet peeve of mine [in this book] was the overload of details. I generally like details, but there came a point when it just became too much. The flashbacks were interesting, and they added some depth to Hawke, but I feel like that was their only purpose. I never learned any information that helped with the storyline from these, so I'm assuming that it was only to add depth.

Now I ask... what is the point? Day One ends with a fairly open ending, and I'm honestly not even sure how we got there. All in all, this one just wasn't for me.

9 comments:

  1. Maja (The Nocturnal Library)November 18, 2013 at 4:45 AM

    Oh. I have this one for review, but even though I tried reading it sseveral times, it just didn't work out. I guess I wasn't wrong. And yeah, I didn't really like Hawke either, not because he was a guy, but because he seemed kind of lost.

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  2. Great review even though you didn't like it. I think this book isn't one for me either though. :)

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  3. Megan@The Book BabeNovember 18, 2013 at 2:19 PM

    Thanks, Steph! Haha, I don't blame you a bit. :P

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  4. Megan@The Book BabeNovember 18, 2013 at 2:20 PM

    Oh, that sucks. O.O I didn't think it was all the great, and I'm sorry that you couldn't get into it either. Hawke was all lost and stuff. He's not who I would have picked for a hero. :/

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  5. Sorry it didn't work out well for you, Megan! It sounded interesting, but I knew I probably wouldn't connect because, yes, he's a guy. It's hard to and I think I only do when it's a multiple POV book. Then I may even like the guy's perspective even better! I'll be staying away from this weird one, thanks :)

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  6. Megan@The Book BabeNovember 18, 2013 at 5:13 PM

    Thanks! I'm sorry that it didn't work out for me too. Haha, well, I'm glad that I'm not the only one who has problems connecting with guy main characters. Teehee - in a multi-pov, I'm the same way! Okay. :P

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  7. Sorry to hear about the open ending! It doesn't sound like it would be for me either

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  8. Yeah, I wasn't a huge fan.

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  9. Neyra @DarkestAddictionsNovember 21, 2013 at 1:20 AM

    Awe, and the cover and blurb look amazing!! I'll probably keep this on my considering pile though, it does sound something interesting :) Great review Megan!

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